02-23-2022, 02:55 PM
Kamas were an advanced weapon.
I learned the bo staff and sai, but didn't do nunchaku or kama.
Wait what?
I learned the bo staff and sai, but didn't do nunchaku or kama.
Wait what?
Commas or no commas in this sentence
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02-23-2022, 02:55 PM
Kamas were an advanced weapon.
I learned the bo staff and sai, but didn't do nunchaku or kama. Wait what?
02-23-2022, 03:20 PM
I'm a descriptive grammarian, but I use the oxford comma as a convention. Sometimes it's necessary to keep clarity in your writing, so I just always insert it in order to avoid constant considerations about its necessity.
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02-23-2022, 05:34 PM
I would use commas if restricted to using only those words in that exact arrangement. It doesn't flow well, but is precisely clear.
However if given the option, I woulds restructure the sentence as many others have already said. An example: I restructured my first sentence above to avoid the use of a comma which unnecessarily broke up the sentence, and it flows much better now.
02-23-2022, 07:57 PM
Tiangou wrote: I like using em-dashes the best because I think it replicates the rhythm of speech in order to clarify it’s meaning. . There is an OCD aspect to this conversation that I enjoyed.
02-23-2022, 10:14 PM
Lux Interior wrote: Kamas? Out of the question. I’d van Gogh myself inside of a week. Love the bo, but how are you gonna get one on a bus? And you know it’s never going to fit in the overhead bin on a plane. You’ll never see an Air Marshal with one. And the sai? Every five minutes some joker yelling “Why don’t you just stab him?!?” And there’s no way I could deal with all the bullfighter comments. So, nunchaku and a wardrobe of “No I’m not Bruce Lee” t-shirts it is.
02-24-2022, 03:42 PM
My general feeling is that the version without commas is incorrect, but I am not a native speaker.
02-25-2022, 05:41 AM
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