02-23-2022, 05:22 AM
The whole sentence feels clunky to me. The use of commas might make it feel less clunky, but that would be camouflage, and disguise is not the purpose of commas.
I would want to interview you about what is your purpose in asking this question, who are you asking it of, and what is the context.
With that information in hand, I would recommend a rewrite, with special attention to eliminating the passive voice.
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I would want to interview you about what is your purpose in asking this question, who are you asking it of, and what is the context.
With that information in hand, I would recommend a rewrite, with special attention to eliminating the passive voice.
- signed with Janit's editorial keyboard