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Design critique, por favor. (Bandwidth warning...)
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>>>Make the 1-2-3 lighter/brighter so it contrasts more with the paint splatter.

I had the light green colour in there but a friend suggested using the dark red to match it with the heading...i prefer the light green actually.

>>>The typeface used for the $9.99 offer, etc. is horrible.

Why? it is the same as the one for the directions. Is it horrible there too and what makes it horrible?

>>>The 'Shareefa' and '2' splatters are too blurry compared to the other ones.

I was wondering about this one as well...

>>>use a different photo in the phone and skew it properly so it doesn't look like you just copied the other photo (which you did, i assume)

I was only given five photos to use. I didn't want to pick another artist because who knows if they the usage rights or not...
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Re: Design critique, por favor. (Bandwidth warning...) - by trisho. - 10-09-2006, 05:13 AM

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