Design critique, por favor. (Bandwidth warning...)

[trisho.]

>>>shadow under the phone so it doesn't look like it's floating.

>>>#2: drop 'and' down to the next line and tighten up the leading.

It was before but I moved upstairs to focus on "CONFIRM". Which method may be better?

>>>What's up on the left of the Ne-Yo image?

Thanks, I didn't notice his extra hattage...

>>>tighten up the leading and reduce the type size a bit on the 'Get them now on your phone ' so the text fits better within the splatter

Thanks.

>>>maybe put their logo on the phone's screen as an alternative?

I thought about that as well but the logo is so long it wouldn't make sense. It's the mobi-Dada.net logo on bottom left. Too much for such a little space.

Why do you think the other font is ugly, still? I would like to have a design reason to possibly change it.

And I am taking this as constructive criticism. It may/will help me land a well-paying job.