10-09-2006, 11:48 AM
Okay y'all, here is another version with some of the criticism applied. I have to run off to a freelancing gig right now but I will tweak it more tonight and repost it. Please keep the criticism coming, I don't mind at all.
Oh, I was uneasy about the medium-serif typeface as well but couldn't quite put my finger on it, that's why I was asking for a specific design reason, such as form instead of "It's ugly, that's why." The new legible sans serif typeface is Helvetica Neue. If anyone else can propose a different sans serif, please do. It's not meant to match the top/call out copy because it's being used for body copy.
Thanks so much so far...
Oh, I was uneasy about the medium-serif typeface as well but couldn't quite put my finger on it, that's why I was asking for a specific design reason, such as form instead of "It's ugly, that's why." The new legible sans serif typeface is Helvetica Neue. If anyone else can propose a different sans serif, please do. It's not meant to match the top/call out copy because it's being used for body copy.
Thanks so much so far...