10-09-2006, 06:48 PM
It needs more color. Don't try so hard to be all matchy-matchy with the limited color pallette. Go with your initial decision and make the 1-2-3 numbers a bright neon green. The 1-2-3 needs to be emphasized to show tha the process is quick and easy.
I like the masking tape bits. Maybe instead of boring beige masking tape, use some of that blue painter's tape for color? It'll go with the spray paint theme you got goin'. Then you can knock out the text that appears on top of the tape... And then instead of neon green for the 1-2-3 numbers, pick up the blue for that...
The "blurry" spray paint bits look bad. Like you got them from different sources (at different resolutions) and you're frankensteining it together at the last minute.
Maybe have the entire left side of the background spray painted black so the silver cell phone pops more. Nah, forget that. You're not selling a phone here. You're selling the ringtones. Make the phone bigger and cropped, bleeding off the edge? Right now the phone is just kinda sitting there. Ho-hum. If you're goin for the teen market. How about showing a Motorola Sidekick3 on there instead of the generic silver phone. Or a Motorola RAZR? Something recognizable for an average teen to make a connection with.
I like the masking tape bits. Maybe instead of boring beige masking tape, use some of that blue painter's tape for color? It'll go with the spray paint theme you got goin'. Then you can knock out the text that appears on top of the tape... And then instead of neon green for the 1-2-3 numbers, pick up the blue for that...
The "blurry" spray paint bits look bad. Like you got them from different sources (at different resolutions) and you're frankensteining it together at the last minute.
Maybe have the entire left side of the background spray painted black so the silver cell phone pops more. Nah, forget that. You're not selling a phone here. You're selling the ringtones. Make the phone bigger and cropped, bleeding off the edge? Right now the phone is just kinda sitting there. Ho-hum. If you're goin for the teen market. How about showing a Motorola Sidekick3 on there instead of the generic silver phone. Or a Motorola RAZR? Something recognizable for an average teen to make a connection with.