07-13-2011, 11:28 AM
1: address it to a particular person.
2: Not "I hope..." Try: You will find me a strong candidate... OR I am a strong candidate..... OR I am the ideal candidate....
3: I don't like "I eagerly await"...... How about: I look forward to speaking with you soon... OR I look forward to working with you OR I look forward to joining your team
Good luck!
2: Not "I hope..." Try: You will find me a strong candidate... OR I am a strong candidate..... OR I am the ideal candidate....
3: I don't like "I eagerly await"...... How about: I look forward to speaking with you soon... OR I look forward to working with you OR I look forward to joining your team
Good luck!